Assessment 'RESEARCH' SJA Oct 3rd

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• Jack, I've looked right back through your blog and there is some good evidence of thoughtful work (especially in earlier posts). 3 generally good analysis of pop videos
• Analysis of the 3 CD covers for Post 16 shows some close observation and understanding of conventions of CD covers and representation of artists

ebi:

• Still lots of work to do to complete??? No where near an 'A' or 'B' grade blog at the moment
• Post 1 - Brief - Missing?
• 7 -Analysis of Rock Videos - one missing?
• Post 8 - Conventions of a Music Video - no visuals?? This should be a really creative and visual post
• Posts 9-11 - Theories - only one?? Where are the other two?
• Post 12 - Low Budget videos - not great - not an example of work that is aspiring for a B grade - needs more analysis - blog creativity - dull to read / dull to look at - at this stage. Your post on 'The Fix' say very little - shows no sigh of thoughtful analysis.
• Post 13 - Mood Board - good mood board - but needs paragraph to explain how artists from this genre want to be represented...
• Post 14 - Genre research - only one music video??? Meant to be 5...
• Post 15 - Genre research / Conventions - just OK... There's a post with a spider diagram and no visuals?? Again, this should be a really thoughtful and creative post...One where you show how much effort you have put into research...
• Post 17 - Record label research - re-do the entry on 679 Artist - as this is so clearly copy and paste - Plagiarism - make this your own work
• Post 18 - Advert research - missing??
• Posts 19-20 - Audience research - where is survey? Where are your results?
• Make sure all posts in this section are under the label 'Research'

Overall: UN - UNSATISFACTORY (referral)  Both Ms Ingram and myself have made it very clear you are underperforming - you know what you need to do. You have until Friday 7th Oct to COMPLETE this Jack - final grade given then with no further opportunity after this date.